writing practice

The development of technology causes traditional skills to die out, agree or disagree?
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Nowadays, technology has been developing, the rapid is becoming shorter and speed is also being faster than before.

>>Nowadays, technology has been rapidly developing and the speed of development is faster than before.

It is getting used to see a new technology rapidly.

>>We are getting used to the development of new technologies these days.

The more we know new technology and become on familiar with using a new.

>>The more we gain knowledge about the latest technology, the more we become familiar using it.

 the faster we would forget that what kinds of skill you use at past.

>>Thus the faster we forget to use our skills.

hence I agree with the development of technology causes traditional skills to die out.

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When I was middle school student, A habit of writing notes was prevalent.

>>When I was a middle student, a habit of writing notes was prevalent.

I could see A lot of books about showing how to write notes easily and how to organize notes at library.

>>I could see a lot of books about how to write notes easily and how to organize notes at the library.

Thanks to this prevalence, my father who used to work at stationary was able to sell lots of notebooks.

>>Thanks to this privilege, my father who used to work at the stationary store was able to sell lots of notebooks.

the habit of writing notes is still important.

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however people use a cell phone for writing something instead of notebooks. .

>>However people use their cellphones in writing something instead of notebooks.

Therefore, We can realized that traditional skills can be forgotten easily by the development of technology