Writing practice

Today, I want to write about the movie I saw last night. The title of the movie is Operation Chromite. It's about the Korea war. When the korea war was happened, North korea got the upper hand about everything more than south korea. In order to make the situation reverse, we needed to take InCheon city which is located in middle of the Korean peninsula. General Douglas MacArthur made a plan. that is the Operation Chromite. To proceed this plan, 7 members of spy went to north korea to get important information. And this movie shows how to get the information and what they did for the plan and south korea. Before I watched the movie, I heard that the movie is not good and the director who makes this movie has a bad reputation. Because there are lots of story in Operation Chromite. but the director couldn't give information of the war to audience. even one of main actor's act was bad. It was not enough to focus on the moive. but it was good to fly some time.

Hi, there! Happy day^^, Thank you for having time and making your homework. You did a good job! It\'s nice to see those students who are making their homework. We, teachers feel good about that because we can see that our students are studying. Ok then, see yah!   T. Jeny     Today, I want to write about the movie I saw last night. >>correct The title of the movie is Operation Chromite. >>The title of the movie was Operation Chromite. It\'s about the Korea war. >>correct  When the korea war was happened, North korea got the upper hand about everything more than south korea. >>When Korean war happened, North Korea got the upper hand on everything more than South korea.  In order to make the situation reverse, we needed to take InCheon city which is located in middle of the Korean peninsula. >>To reverse the situation, we needed to take back Incheon City, which is located in middle of the Korean peninsula. General Douglas MacArthur made a plan that is the Operation Chromite. >>correct To proceed this plan, 7 members of spy went to north korea to get important information. >>To proceed with this plan, 7 spies went to North Korea to get important information.  And this movie shows how to get the information and what they did for the plan and south korea. >> And this movie showed on how how they got the information and what they\'ve done. Before I watched the movie, I heard that the movie is not good and the director who makes this movie has a bad reputation. >>Before I watched the movie, I heard that the movie was not good and the director who made this movie had a bad reputation. Because there are lots of story in Operation Chromite. >>Because there were lots of stories in Operation Chromite. but the director couldn\'t give information of the war to audience. >>But the director couldn\'t give information about the war to the audience. even one of main actor\'s act was bad. >>correct It was not enough to focus on the moive but it was good to fly sometime. >>correct