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T. Jeny
One of my hobbies is cook.
>>One of my hobbies is cooking.
When I was young, My parents used to work together for a living.
>>correct
I had to stay home whole day.
>>I had to stay home the whole day.
no one took care of me and my meals.
>>No one took care of me and cooked for me as well.
that\'s why I became interested in cooking.
>>correct
When I cook at first, just fried an egg.
>>At first, I just cook fried eggs.
even If I burn the egg, I kept trying to cook.
>> Even if I burn the egg, I kept on trying.
My skills was getting better than before.
>>correct
I started to be responsible for breakfast for my family.
>>I started to be responsible and cooked breakfast for my family.
I did it till I moved to other city for university.
>>correct
During this period, I could learn how to cook and now I can cook most of Korean dishes.
>>correct
My favorite food which I am good to make is Braised Short Ribs and DdukBokki.
>>My favorite food which I am good at making are Braised Short Ribs and DdukBokki.
Sometimes I felt lonely because no one was in house when I was young.
>>Sometimes I feel lonely because no one was home when I was young.
but Thanks to cooking, I could enjoy my time and respect my mother how she did hard for my family.
>>but Thanks to cooking, I could enjoy my time and respect my mother how she did hard for my family.
even If I started to cook to forget my lonely, now I really love it
>>correct
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