Writing task
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Q) What is your favorite holiday? Why?
A) I like Christmas the most of the year. I like the city being decorated when Christmas is coming, and the atmosphere give me a feeling of expectation. It is also exciting to look forward to a new year at the end of the year.
For celebrating Christmas, I prepare special dish or reserve a restaurant and enjoy the day with my family or friends. I wish every day was Christmas!
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Good day, [이름]!
Q) What is your favorite holiday? Why?
A) I like Christmas the most of the year.
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Here are some of the corrections, but other than that, you really did great. :) Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
A) I like Christmas the most of the year.
>> I like Christmas the most.
For celebrating Christmas, I prepare special dish or reserve a restaurant and enjoy the day with my family or friends.
I like the city being decorated when Christmas is coming, and the atmosphere give me a feeling of expectation.
>> I like the city being decorated when Christmas is coming, and the atmosphere gives me a feeling of excitement.
It is also exciting to look forward to a new year at the end of the year.
>> It is also exciting to look forward to a new year.
For celebrating Christmas, I prepare special dish or reserve a restaurant and enjoy the day with my family or friends.
>> CORRECT!
I wish every day was Christmas!
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I wish everyday is Christmas day!
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