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Q) Why is it important to train our dogs at an early age?
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As educating child of human, it is important to train dogs at an early age because it is easier to make them a habit. It is difficult to change when bad behavior has become a habit already. Thus in korea there is a old saying, \"The habit of three years old lasts to eighty.\"
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~ T. CamilleQ) Why is it important to train our dogs at an early age?
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As educating child of human, it is important to train dogs at an early age because it is easier to make them a habit.
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As educating child of human, it is important to train dogs at an early age because it is easier to make them a habit.
>> Like educating a child, it is important to train dogs at an early age because it is easier for them to make a habit.
It is difficult to change when bad behavior has become a habit already.
>> CORRECT!
Thus in korea there is a old saying, \"The habit of three years old lasts to eighty.\"
>> Thus in Korea there is an old saying, \"The habit of three years old lasts to eighty.\"
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