Writing task
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I don’t ask their family members to people who I just met. I think it can be a rude question for who suffered from divorce or kind of separations. Also, I don’t ask a political ideology to them. Everyone’s ideologies are different. And if we discuss about the politic, we used to persuade each other. And then, it leads to an ideological dispute. Actually, I don’t really ask this topic to my friends too.
These two topics are what I don’t ask to people who I just met.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robin.
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with what you have mentioned. These are really topics that we should not talk about especially to people we just met since it can create conflict.
- T. Caitlyn
I don’t ask their family members to people who I just met.
>> I don\'t ask about their family members to people who I just met.
I think it can be a rude question for who suffered from divorce or kind of separations.
>> I think it can be a rude question for those who suffered from divorce or those kinds of separation.
Also, I don’t ask a political ideology to them.
>> Also, I don’t ask them about their political ideology.
Everyone’s ideologies are different. And if we discuss about the politic, we used to persuade each other.
>> Everyone’s ideologies are different and if we discuss politics, it can lead to persuading each other.
And then, it leads to an ideological dispute.
>> CORRECT
Actually, I don’t really ask this topic to my friends too.
>> Actually, I don’t really ask about this topic to my friends too.
These two topics are what I don’t ask to people who I just met.
These two topics are what I don’t ask to people who I just met.
>> These two topics are what I don’t ask people who I just met.
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