Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
These days, journey is the favorite topic in Korea. After COVID19, many people start to take a trip. Especially, Japan is the most popular country because of the near location and many delicious foods. If I meet my friends, we plan the trip too. I would like to go Europe with my friends. Because I love soccer, and I hope to watch a soccer match that SON is playing in.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robin.
You did great in answering your homework. I agree with you, traveling is an interesting topic nowadays because people were not able to go out during the pandemic. I really hope you can go to Europe with your friends and watch Son Heung-min play.
- T. Caitlyn
These days, journey is the favorite topic in Korea.
>> These days, traveling is one of the most favorite topics in Korea.
After COVID19, many people start to take a trip.
>> CORRECT
Especially, Japan is the most popular country because of the near location and many delicious foods.
>> Japan is the most popular country to go to because of its near location and many delicious foods.
If I meet my friends, we plan the trip too.
>> Whenever I meet my friends, we plan to go on trips, too.
I would like to go Europe with my friends. Because I love soccer, and I hope to watch a soccer match that SON is playing in.
>> I would like to go to Europe with my friends because I love soccer, and I hope to watch a soccer match where SON is playing.
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