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I can spice up my holidays by delicious foods. I love to eat tasty foods such as chicken and sushi. So I often go to a restaurant with my family. If there is a famous restaurant where we have to wait, I can wait long time for it. As much as that, delicious food is important to me.
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Happy Monday, Robin.
I agree with you, waiting in line is worth it if the food is really delicious.
- T. Caitlyn
I can spice up my holidays by delicious foods.
>> I can spice up my holidays by eating delicious food.
I love to eat tasty foods such as chicken and sushi.
>> I love to eat tasty food such as chicken and sushi.
So I often go to a restaurant with my family.
>> I often go to restaurants with my family.
If there is a famous restaurant where we have to wait, I can wait long time for it.
>> I can even wait for a long time just to eat at a famous restaurant.
As much as that, delicious food is important to me.
>> I can do that much just to eat delicious food.
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