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I often take a risk and try new food. For example, I order brand new beer and pizza in pub. Because I like to become a pioneer and introduce new delicious food to my friends. And if I find new delicious food what many people don’t know, I feel really great. However I don’t always try new food. If there is only one satisfied menu in one restaurant, I order same food for long time such as ‘bulgogi burger’ in McDonalds.
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Hi, Robin.
I agree with what you\'ve said. It is really nice and satisfying to discover new delicious food. It\'s great to try something new from time to time.
-T. Caitlin
I often take a risk and try new food.
>>CORRECT
For example, I order brand new beer and pizza in pub.
>>For example, I order a new brand of beer and pizza in a pub.
Because I like to become a pioneer and introduce new delicious food to my friends.
>>I like to become a pioneer and introduce new delicious food to my friends.
And if I find new delicious food what many people don’t know, I feel really great.
>If I find new delicious food that many people don’t know, I feel really great.
However I don’t always try new food.
>>However, I don’t always try new food.
If there is only one satisfied menu in one restaurant, I order same food for long time such as ‘bulgogi burger’ in McDonalds.
>>If there is only one satisfying menu in a restaurant then I will order the same food for a long time such as ‘bulgogi burger’ at Mcdonald\'s.
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