Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
One of my military cadre-men is the healthiest person I know. He always exercises in gym. Additionally, he plays soccer and basketball too. He has strong power, flexibility, and endurance. He is positive. He smiles to soldiers everyday. I think he is healthy both physically and mentally.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Robin!
Great job with your composition. Just take note of some corrections like if a person has a positive outlook in life, you can use the word \"optimistic\". Your sentences are really improving. Keep it up.
- T. Caitlyn
One of my military cadre men is the healthiest person I know.
>> CORRECT
He always exercises in gym.
>> He always exercises in the gym.
Additionally, he plays soccer and basketball too.
>> CORRECT
He has strong power, flexibility, and endurance.
>> CORRECT
He is positive.
>> He is optimistic.
He smiles to soldiers everyday.
>> He smiles at soldiers every day.
I think he is healthy both physically and mentally.
>> CORRECT
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