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Vaccination is the way to overcome the disease. But I don’t believe vaccine 100%. Especially, the vaccine which has a few simulation can make a side effect. And we can’t check all types of human. So I think we have to take a risk and be vaccinated for our health.
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Happy Monday, Robin!
I agree. Not all vaccines are 100 percent effective and safe so it\'s more of taking the risk when we receive it. A good example would be the Covid19 vaccines. Great job with your composition. Just take note of some minor corrections. Have a great day.
- T. Caitlyn
Vaccination is the way to overcome the disease. But I don’t believe vaccine 100%.
>> Vaccination is the way to overcome the disease, but I don\'t believe in vaccines 100%.
Especially, the vaccine which has a few simulation can make a side effect.
>> Especially those vaccines that only have a few simulations which can cause side effects.
And we can’t check all types of human.
>> Also, we can\'t test it on all types of humans.
So I think we have to take a risk and be vaccinated for our health.
>> CORRECT
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