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I would never go to Greenland. It is located in very North and sorted from glaciers. So there is very cold and nothing to see. I don’t want to go Russia too. Similar with Greenland, there is so cold. And I would not feel conquer the country because it is too huge to know about the country exactly. For these reasons these two countries are where I would not visit.
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Hi, Robin.
I see. So those two countries are the ones you don\'t want to visit. It made me realize the same thought since I also don\'t like going to places that are very cold.
-T. CaitlinI would never go to Greenland.
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It is located in very North and sorted from glaciers. So there is very cold and nothing to see.
>> It is located in the northernmost part surrounded by glaciers so it is very cold and there is nothing to see.
I don’t want to go Russia too.
>> I don’t want to go to Russia too.
Similar with Greenland, there is so cold.
>> Similar to Greenland, Russia is so cold.
And I would not feel conquer the country because it is too huge to know about the country exactly.
>> I would not feel contented because this country is vast to explore.
For these reasons these two countries are where I would not visit.
>> For these reasons, these are the two countries that I would not visit.
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