Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
Enrichment
- The enrichment of the land needs a lot of supplements.
- For enrichment of my knowledge, I often read a book.
Discover
- Detective discovers a clue, no matter how small it is.
- The miner wants to discover a gold.
Destination
- Getting married is one of my life destination.
- This airplane’s destination is Incheon.
* ‘Enrichment’ is really hard to make a sentence..
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robin.
Great job with your sentences. Just take note of how and when to use the articles a, an, and the in a sentence. Also, you did a wonderful job even if you find it difficult to make sentences using the word \"enrichment\".
-T. CaitlinEnrichment
The enrichment of the land needs a lot of supplements.
The enrichment of the land needs a lot of supplements.
>> CORRECT.
For enrichment of my knowledge, I often read a book.
>> For the enrichment of my knowledge, I often read books.
Discover
Detective discovers a clue, no matter how small it is.
For enrichment of my knowledge, I often read a book.
>> For the enrichment of my knowledge, I often read books.
Discover
Detective discovers a clue, no matter how small it is.
>> Detectives discover clues, no matter how small they are.
The miner wants to discover a gold.
>>The miner wants to discover gold.
Destination
Getting married is one of my life destination.
The miner wants to discover a gold.
>>The miner wants to discover gold.
Destination
Getting married is one of my life destination.
>>Getting married is one of my life destinations.
This airplane’s destination is Incheon.
This airplane’s destination is Incheon.
>> CORRECT.
‘Enrichment’ is really hard to make a sentence..
>> ‘Enrichment’ is really hard to use in a sentence.
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