Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
I inherited a personality from father. I can get close to people who I meet first. For example, my dad and I can talk easily with waiters in restaurant. I look like with my dad too. Drooping eyes, skinny body and wrinkle in my face make me more similar with my father.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robin.
It\'s nice to know that you inherited positive traits from your father. Being outgoing is such a great personality because it can help you meet more people and make more friends.
-T. Caitlyn
I inherited a personality from father.
>> I inherited a personality from my father.
I can get close to people who I meet first.
>> I can easily get close to people I met for the first time.
For example, my dad and I can talk easily with waiters in restaurant.
>> For instance, my dad and I can talk easily with waiters in restaurants.
I look like with my dad too.
>> I look like my dad, too.
Drooping eyes, skinny body and wrinkle in my face make me more similar with my father.
>> Drooping eyes, a skinny body, and wrinkles on my face make me more similar to my father.
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