Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. Our city has absolutely good public transportation system. There are a lot of subway stations and various buses. I can go everywhere suburban by these public transportations. In addition, there is a public bike in Seoul, so we can go near place cheaply. I think our city is really good to live.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Robin.
It is nice that you live in Seoul and yes, I heard that the transportation system there is very accessible.
-T. Caitlyn
Yes.
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Our city has absolutely good public transportation system.
>> Our city has an absolutely good public transportation system.
There are a lot of subway stations and various buses.
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I can go everywhere suburban by these public transportations.
>> I can go to suburban areas by using these public transportation systems.
In addition, there is a public bike in Seoul, so we can go near place cheaply.
>> In addition, there are public bikes in Seoul, so we can go to nearby places cheaply.
I think our city is really good to live.
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