Writing task
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The Korean bus have seats for two each side. These seats make aisle between themselves. People usually sit window side seat to make others comfortable. Furthermore, window side passenger ring the bell, aisle side passenger give way rapidly. By the way, of course all people give up their seats to elderly, pregnant women, and parent with young baby.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robin.
It is nice to know that people riding public transportation are considerate of others. There are also still some people who do this in our country, but not as common as before.
-T. CaitlinThe Korean bus have seats for two each side.
>> The Korean bus has seats for two on each side.
These seats make aisle between themselves.
>> These seats make an aisle in between.
People usually sit window side seat to make others comfortable.
>> People usually sit in window-side seats to make others comfortable.
Furthermore, window side passenger ring the bell, aisle side passenger give way rapidly
>> Furthermore, when a window-side passenger rings the bell, aisle-side passengers give way immediately.
By the way, of course all people give up their seats to elderly, pregnant women, and parent with young baby.
>> By the way, of course, all people give up their seats to the elderly, pregnant women, and parents with babies.
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