Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course I do. First, as I said before, my meal time is decided to family’s work time. Family matters control my feeling too. For example, if family members fight each other, I feel bad that day. Also, someone get high score or happy occasion, then I feel happy.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robin.
I really appreciate that you take time to do your homework. It\'s nice to see that your family has a great impact in your life. Also, great job in those correct sentences. Keep it up!
- T. Caitlyn
Of course I do.
>> CORRECT
First, as I said before, my meal time is decided to family’s work time.
>> First, as I\'ve said before, my mealtime is decided based on my family\'s work schedule.
Family matters control my feeling too.
>> CORRECT
For example, if family members fight each other, I feel bad that day.
>> CORRECT
Also, someone get high score or happy occasion, then I feel happy.
>> Also, if someone gets a high score or there\'s a happy occasion, then I feel happy.
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