Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
It’s their choice. Nowadays, it’s hard to buy own home and get a job. Having a child can burden them. However, I advise them to have a child. Especially in Korea, there is very low population. It influences the economic growth. We should have a baby.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Robin!
I agree. Nowadays, it\'s up to married couples if they want to have kids or not. I know that the Korean government is doing its best to encourage them, but still it is not enough. Hopefully, people will soon realize the importance of giving birth.
- T. Caitlyn
It’s their choice.
>> CORRECT
Nowadays, it’s hard to buy own home and get a job.
>> Nowadays, it’s hard to buy your own home and get a job.
Having a child can burden them.
>> CORRECT
However, I advise them to have a child. Especially in Korea, there is very low population.
>> However, I would advise them to have a child especially that Korea has low birthrate.
It influences the economic growth.
>> It influences economic growth.
We should have a baby.
>> CORRECT
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