Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
I think names lead our life. For example, if I have a same name with celebrity, I sometimes think of him. Once in a while, I heard that ‘You have a same name with him’. Then I want to look like that celebrity, and behave like him.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robin.
I agree with this. I think names can influence the way we behave and at he same time, can also be our motivation.
-T. CaitlynI think names lead our life.
>> I think names shape our life.
For example, if I have a same name with celebrity, I sometimes think of him.
>> For example, if I have the same name as a celebrity, I sometimes think of him.
Once in a while, I heard that ‘You have a same name with him’.
>> Once in a while, I would hear people say \'‘You have the same name as him.’\'.
Then I want to look like that celebrity, and behave like him.
>> Thus, I want to look like that celebrity and behave like him.
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