Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
I need my family a lot when I’m sick. Especially being sick, I depend on my family. Also, my family take care of me with all their hearts. They cook soup and wipe me up. The poorest situation is the most necessary situation for me.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robin!
Great job with your composition. You are right, when we are sick, we tend to depend on others and these are the times we appreciate are families more.
-T. Caitlyn
I need my family a lot when I’m sick.
>> CORRECT
Especially being sick, I depend on my family.
>> CORRECT
Also, my family take care of me with all their hearts.
>> Also, my family takes care of me with all their hearts.
They cook soup and wipe me up.
>> CORRECT
The poorest situation is the most necessary situation for me.
>> CORRECT
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