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The blind date was my first date with different age. That was absolutely different from date with friend.
I can accept 5 years older than me. However that’s only allowed when I work. If I don’t have a job, then date with her burden me financially.
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Hi, Robin.
There is indeed nothing wrong in dating someone older than you, but still, conditions matter, like what you mentioned about having a job first or else dating that person might be burdensome for you.
-T. Caitlyn
The blind date was my first date with different age.
>> I had a blind date for the first time with someone of different age.
That was absolutely different from date with friend.
>> That was absolutely different from dating a friend.
I can accept 5 years older than me.
I can accept 5 years older than me.
>> CORRECT
However that’s only allowed when I work.
>> However, that\'s only allowed once I\'m already working.
If I don’t have a job, then date with her burden me financially.
>> If I don\'t have a job, dating her will burden me financially.
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