Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was in the military, I gave advices a lot to younger people. The main content was ‘Think other’s point of view’ (putting on the other\'s shoe). If we think and behave like this, people should behave kindly. I always consider other people, and it is my motto now.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robin!
I agree. I believe that we should always be kind and try to understand others because we don\'t know what they are going through. I also believe in the law of Karma that whatever you do will come back to you.
-T. Caitlyn
When I was in the military, I gave advices a lot to younger people.
>> When I was in the military, I gave pieces of advice to a lot of younger people.
The main content was ‘Think other’s point of view’ (putting on the other\'s shoe).
>> The main content was ‘Think from other’s point of view’ or \'Putting yourself in someone else\'s shoes\'.
If we think and behave like this, people should behave kindly.
>> CORRECT
I always consider other people, and it is my motto now.
>> CORRECT
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