Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
They can be confused when they express their thinking. For example, sometimes they don’t know the word in Korean, as they know in English, when they talk with Korean. Then, they must describe hardly.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robin!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through writing. Keep practicing to enhance your skills.
They can be confused when they express their thinking. >> Correct
OR:
>>They
can become confused when expressing their thoughts.
For example, sometimes they don’t know the word in Korean, as they know in English, when they talk with Korean.
>> For
example, there are times when they don\'t know the Korean word for something
they know in English, requiring them to describe it more extensively.
Then, they must describe hardly.
>> Then, they must describe it more extensively.
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