Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
I am a international school student. I take all class in English. To talk with professors or TA, I need fluent English skill. I hope to have a conversation with them very natural.
I like to have foreigner friends. I love to learn their culture, and go to their country if I can. For being close friend, fluency is the significant part for me.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Robin!
I am a international school student.
>>> correct.
>>> OR: I am a student in an international school.
I take all class in English.
>>> I take all classes in English.
To talk with professors or TA, I need fluent English skill.
>>> correct
I hope to have a conversation with them very natural.
>>> I hope to have a conversation with them very naturally.
I like to have foreigner friends.
>>> correct
I love to learn their culture, and go to their country if I can.
>>> correct
For being close friend, fluency is the significant part for me.
>>> To be close friends them, fluency is the most significant part for me.
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