Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
I think men and women have same goals about their life. They pursue their success and richness. Also, they want to find genuine lover. I cannot differentiate goals whether men or women want.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robin!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree! It\'s very difficult to distinguish the difference between men\'s and women\'s goals.
-T. Caitlyn
I think men and women have same goals about their life.
>> I think men and women have the same goals in life.
They pursue their success and richness.
>> CORRECT
Also, they want to find genuine lover.
>> Also, they want to find genuine lovers.
I cannot differentiate goals whether men or women want.
>> I cannot differentiate goals whether it\'s what men or women want.
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