Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
I watched korean drama, ‘a wise doctor’s life’. In that drama, doctors make a band play together. They are alumni each other, and it looks very cool for me. So I make a band with my soccer friends recently. Now I will play and record our performances.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Robin!
Thank you for doing your homework. Wow! That\'s really great! Playing not only soccer but also music together sounds like a lot of fun, and I can imagine how lucky you all are to have found each other – people who share the same interests.
-T. Caitlyn
I watched korean drama, ‘a wise doctor’s life’.
>> I watched a Korean drama entitled \"A wise doctor\'s life.\".
In that drama, doctors make a band play together.
>> In that drama, a group of doctors forms a band and plays music together.
They are alumni each other, and it looks very cool for me.
>> They are alumni of the same school, and it looks very cool to me.
So I make a band with my soccer friends recently.
>> So I formed a band with my soccer friends recently.
Now I will play and record our performances.
>> CORRECT
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