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Sleeping alone is more comfortable. I can choose my sleeping time. For example, I can turn off the light whenever I want, and I can watch Youtube how long I want. The most important thing when I sleep is temperature. If sleeping partner has different body temperature, I can’t sleep well because of not proper room temperature.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Robin!
Happy Friday! I agree! Sleeping with other people makes you consider and adjust, so if you are not comfortable doing it, you\'re better off sleeping alone.
-T. Caitlyn
Sleeping alone is more comfortable.
>> CORRECT
I can choose my sleeping time.
>> CORRECT
For example, I can turn off the light whenever I want, and I can watch Youtube how long I want.
>> For example, I can turn off the light whenever I want, and I can watch YouTube for as long as I want.
The most important thing when I sleep is temperature.
>> The most important thing when I sleep is the temperature.
If sleeping partner has different body temperature, I can’t sleep well because of not proper room temperature.
>> If my sleeping partner has a different body temperature, I can\'t sleep well because of the improper room temperature.
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