writing task

2019-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

I think colorful, beautiful and lonely are matched with autumn. Leaves have various colors in autumn so it looks colorful. Also, I think it looks very beautiful. However when I see fallen leaves in autumn, I feel lonely. In this reason, I choose those adjective.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday, Lily! ^^,)


Thank you for doing your homework.

I also like autumn for the same reasons.

I will talk to you again on Monday.^^


_T. Mayleen :)



I think colorful, beautiful and lonely are matched with autumn.

>>> Correct!

Leaves have various colors in autumn so it looks colorful.

>>> Leaves have various colors in autumn so they\'re colorful.

Also, I think it looks very beautiful.

>>> Also, I think that looks very beautiful.

However when I see fallen leaves in autumn, I feel lonely.

>>> However, when I see fallen leaves in autumn I feel lonely.

In this reason, I choose those adjective.

>>> For this reasons, I choose those adjectives to describe autumn.

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