writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Lily! ^^,)
Thank you for doing your homework.
I also like autumn for the same reasons.
I will talk to you again on Monday.^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I think colorful, beautiful and lonely are matched with autumn.
>>> Correct!
Leaves have various colors in autumn so it looks colorful.
>>> Leaves have various colors in autumn so they\'re colorful.
Also, I think it looks very beautiful.
>>> Also, I think that looks very beautiful.
However when I see fallen leaves in autumn, I feel lonely.
>>> However, when I see fallen leaves in autumn I feel lonely.
In this reason, I choose those adjective.
>>> For this reasons, I choose those adjectives to describe autumn.
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