writing task

2019-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

When I hear the word \'September\', new semester springs to mind. The reason is that the vacation usually ends in the first week of September. Then the new semester begins. So I think the new semester really goes with the word \'September.\'

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Lily! ^^,)

Here in my country, September marks the start of \'BER season\'. That is from September to December. In this time of the year, people save money for the semestral break, family r[이름]ions, and Christmas.

I will talk to you later in class.^^ See you then.

_T. Mayleen :)

When I hear the word \'September\', new semester springs to mind.

>>> CORRECT

The reason is that the vacation usually ends in the first week of September.

>>> CORRECT

Then the new semester begins.

>>> CORRECT

So I think the new semester really goes with the word \'September.\'

>>> Thus, I think the phrase \'new semester\' really goes well with the \'September.\'

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