writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Lily! ^.^)
Thank you so much for your effort to answer your homework.
Accusing and reporting are two different things.
I agree though, one must report any cases of violence such as bullying.
See you later in class.^^
_T. Mayleen :)
If I was bullied at school or at work, I would accuse them.
>>> If I was bullied at school or at work, I would report them.
It\'s really painful and scared to be bullied so many people avoid to accuse it.
>>> It\'s really painful and scary to be bullied so many people are ashamed to report it.
However, patience does not help change anything, and instead, harassment will only continue.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore I will make this situation better by accusing those who have bullied me.
>>> Therefore, I will make my situation better by reporting those who have bullied me.
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