writing task

2019-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

If I was bullied at school or at work, I would accuse them. It\'s really painful and scared to be bullied so many people avoid to accuse it. However, patience does not help change anything, and instead, harassment will only continue. Therefore I will make this situation better by accusing those who have bullied me.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Lily! ^.^)

Thank you so much for your effort to answer your homework.

Accusing and reporting are two different things.

I agree though, one must report any cases of violence such as bullying.

See you later in class.^^


_T. Mayleen :)



If I was bullied at school or at work, I would accuse them.

>>> If I was bullied at school or at work, I would report them.

It\'s really painful and scared to be bullied so many people avoid to accuse it.

>>> It\'s really painful and scary to be bullied so many people are ashamed to report it.

However, patience does not help change anything, and instead, harassment will only continue.

>>> CORRECT

Therefore I will make this situation better by accusing those who have bullied me.

>>> Therefore, I will make my situation better by reporting those who have bullied me.

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