writing task

Hello there, Lily! ^^,)

You did a good job in your composition.

Be very careful with the word order in your sentences.

I will talk to you again tomorrow.^^

Have a good night.

_T. Mayleen :)

The best thing about korea is that we can easily use the fast-paced Internet.

>>> The best thing about Korea is that we can easily access internet and it\'s really fast.

Korea has very excellent telecommunications network.

>>> Korea has an excellent internet and communication network.

It helps to use more faster internet.

>>> It makes internet connection faster and more stable.

Also, there are many kinds of pc room in korea so many people can access to internet simply.

>>> Also, there are a lot of PC rooms/internet shops in Korea so many people can easily access the internet.