WRITING TASK
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework is too hard.^^
Answer the question briefly.
Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What is your opinion about this?
In the past, intelligence has become a measure of success. But now, intelligence alone cannot succeed.
Future societies require intelligence, character, creativity and convergent thinking.
And they can only succeed if they can put all of this together and make new things.
But
Success is not so important either. It is more important to live right and enjoy happiness as a human being than to succeed.
강사 첨삭
Hi Cecelia! I am sorry if you found the homework hard. I will make it easier next time. ^^
However your answer is very nice! ^^
~~Teacher May~~
In the past, intelligence has become a measure of success. But now, intelligence alone cannot succeed.
Future societies require intelligence, character, creativity and convergent thinking.
And they can only succeed if they can put all of this together and make new things.
But
Success is not so important either. It is more important to live right and enjoy happiness as a human being than to succeed.
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