writing task

2019-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

The color that gives me happiness is sky blue. When I see sky blue, I feel good because I think of blue sky. Also, I really love to see the sea, so I like the sky blue because it seems like the light of sea color. Indeed, sky blue gives me comfort.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday, Lily! ^-^

I hope you are doing fine. I will talk to you later in class.

Thank you for answering your homework.

Although, you slightly misunderstood the question but you\'re explanation\'s already enough.

_T. Mayleen :)

The color that gives me happiness is sky blue.

>>> CORRECT

When I see sky blue, I feel good because I think of blue sky.

>>> When I see the color sky blue, I feel good because it reminds me of the blue sky.

Also, I really love to see the sea, so I like the sky blue because it seems like the light of sea color.

>>> Also, I love the sea and the water reflects the color of the sky.

Indeed, sky blue gives me comfort.

>>> CORRECT

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