Writing Task
학생이 쓴 원문
Answer the question briefly.
What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
What is success in life?
Wouldn\'t it be different for each person?
someone who wants to be rich, someone who wants a high position, someone who has a good talent, etc.
But I think that to be a truly successful person, one must not lose one\'s moral conscience.
강사 첨삭
Thanks for sharing your opinions Cecelia! I wish that you also succeed
in all your remaining goals. See you later. ^^
~~Teacher May~~
What is success in life?
Wouldn\'t it be different for each person?
>> CORRECT
someone who wants to be rich, someone who wants a high position, someone who has a good talent, etc.
>> Some people want to be rich, to have a high position, to have a good talent, etc.
But I think that to be a truly successful person, one must not lose one\'s moral conscience.
>> CORRECT
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