Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
1. dominate
Our country is dominated by corona-19 virus. A number of the people were infected is increasing seriously. So, all that I want now is to know when the vaccine against that virus is developed and to disappear the virus all over the planet..Until that day we ought to take care of our selves.
2. restore
A few days ago, My right thumb was wounded by a cap at the cover of a pot!! So, My wife suggested that I go to hospital and restore my thumb. A next day I went to hospital to restore my thumb. The doctor told me if you want to restore as can as possible, your wound must be sew up. So, I decided to sew up my wound and the doctor sewed the wound up about 4times. After curing, the doctor porporsed that my thumb rest for 2 weeks. And now, my lovely right thumb is restored.
3. innovate
My boss always ask that we innovate all over the work everyday. If we had innovated some part of the work, he request us to find another work to innovate. Our colleuage still bother
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]suk! T[이름]k you for doing your homework today.
You have a done a great job with your sentences.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow! :)
~Teacher Sheila
>>Our country is being dominated by the corona-19 virus.
A number of the people were infected is increasing seriously.
>>The number of people who are infected is increasing seriously.
OR>>The number of people infected is increasing rapidly.
So, all that I want now is to know when the vaccine against that virus is developed and to disappear the virus all over the planet..
>>So, all that I want now is to know when the vaccine against that virus is developed and to let that virus disappear from our planet.
Until that day we ought to take care of our selves.
>>Until that day, we ought to take care of ourselves.
A few days ago, My right thumb was wounded by a cap at the cover of a pot!!
>>A few days ago, my right thumb was wounded by the cover of a pot.
OR>>A few days ago, my right thumb was cut by the cover of a pot.
So, My wife suggested that I go to hospital and restore my thumb.
>>My wife suggested that I go to the hospital and restore my thumb.
A next day I went to hospital to restore my thumb.
>>The next day, I went to the hospital to restore my thumb.
The doctor told me if you want to restore as can as possible, your wound must be sew up.
>>The doctor told me, \"If you want to restore as fast as possible, your wound must be sewed up.\"
So, I decided to sew up my wound and the doctor sewed the wound up about 4times.
>>So, I decided to let my wound be sewed up by the doctor for about 4 times.
After curing, the doctor porporsed that my thumb rest for 2 weeks.
>>After healing, the doctor proposed that my thumb should rest for 2 weeks.
OR>>After sewing, the doctor suggested that I should rest my thumb for 2 weeks.
And now, my lovely right thumb is restored.
>>CORRECT
My boss always ask that we innovate all over the work everyday.
>>My boss always asks to innovate work every day.
If we had innovated some part of the work, he request us to find another work to innovate.
>>If we had innovated some parts of the work, he requests us to find another work to innovate.
Our colleuage still bother
>>Our colleague is bothered.
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