Writing task
학생이 쓴 원문
First of all, I want to become a great english speaker. I will discuss about the international issue at least, and I will direct the people who don’t know the way during the travel.
Second, I want accomplish my goal. My goal is about the instinct. It’s not about the similar way with others, it’s about keeping my thoughts, mind, perspective.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I look forward developing your English communication skills everyday.
First of all, I want to become a great English speaker.
>> First of all, I want to become a great speaker of the English language.
I will discuss about the international issue at least, and I will direct the people who don’t know the way during the travel.
>> I want to be able to discuss the international issue and I want to guide people on different locations.
Second, I want accomplish my goal.
>> Second, I want to accomplish my goal.
My goal is about the instinct.
>> My goal is about instinct.
It’s not about the similar way with others, it’s about keeping my thoughts, mind, perspective.
>> It\'s not about how others live, it\'s about keeping my thoughts, mind and perspective.
I look forward developing your English communication skills everyday.
First of all, I want to become a great English speaker.
>> First of all, I want to become a great speaker of the English language.
I will discuss about the international issue at least, and I will direct the people who don’t know the way during the travel.
>> I want to be able to discuss the international issue and I want to guide people on different locations.
Second, I want accomplish my goal.
>> Second, I want to accomplish my goal.
My goal is about the instinct.
>> My goal is about instinct.
It’s not about the similar way with others, it’s about keeping my thoughts, mind, perspective.
>> It\'s not about how others live, it\'s about keeping my thoughts, mind and perspective.
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