Writing Task(Apr 12th, 2022)

2022-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

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Which is a better way to spend your holiday, go away on vacation or go on staycation? Before marriage, I always went out to go somewhere on every weekend. But after marriage, I found out that staying at home is what I like the most. However, my wife does\'t like to be at home on weekends. She sleeps for nearly half a day just lying on the bed if she doesn\'t go out of the house, which means there\'s lost of things that I have to, mainly to play with my daughter. Do you know how hard it is to play with a preschool child without any break time? I never sleep when my daughter is awake. Honestly, I can\'t sleep. My daughter never lets me sleep. So, what I want to tell you is that I have to go out even if I don\'t like to go out because staying at home is much more difficult to take a rest.

강사 첨삭

Hi, U [이름]! 

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one.

~T. Roanne ^_^
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Before marriage, I always went out to go somewhere on every weekend. 
>> Correct! 
But after marriage, I found out that staying at home is what I like the most. 
>> Correct! 
However, my wife does\'t like to be at home on weekends. 
>> However, my wife doesn\'t like to be at home on weekends. 
She sleeps for nearly half a day just lying on the bed if she doesn\'t go out of the house, which means there\'s lost of things that I have to, mainly to play with my daughter. 
>> She sleeps for nearly half a day just lying on the bed if she doesn\'t go out of the house, which means there\'s lots of things that I have to, mainly to play with my daughter. 
Do you know how hard it is to play with a preschool child without any break time? I never sleep when my daughter is awake. Honestly, I can\'t sleep. 
>> Correct! 
My daughter never lets me sleep. 
>> Correct! 
So, what I want to tell you is that I have to go out even if I don\'t like to go out because staying at home is much more difficult to take a rest.
>> Correct! 

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