Writing Task(Apr 12th, 2022)

2022-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

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What other languages are you interested to learn? I don’t have any interests in learning a new language at the moment If I have some time to learn another language, I would rather choose to use that time to learn English more deeply. About ten years before, I thought I would have to learn Janpanese because the Japanese animations I watched at that time were really creative, well plotted and have mind-grasping story. I thought that I would be able to be more soaked in the ani films if I could watch a film without subtitles. So, I bought a basic Japanese book and studied. But I quit doing it after a few months later because it was so broing

강사 첨삭

Hi, U [이름]! Thank you for sharing~

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I don’t have any interests in learning a new language at the moment

>> Correct!
If I have some time to learn another language, I would rather choose to use that time to learn English more deeply.

>> Correct!
About ten years before, I thought I would have to learn Janpanese because the Japanese animations I watched at that time were really creative, well plotted and have mind-grasping story.

>> About ten years before, I thought I would have to learn Japanese because the Japanese animations I watched at that time were really creative, well plotted and have mind-grasping story.

I thought that I would be able to be more soaked in the ani films if I could watch a film without subtitles.

>> I thought that I would be able to be more soaked in the animated films if I could watch a film without subtitles.

So, I bought a basic Japanese book and studied. But I quit doing it after a few months later because it was so broing

>> So, I bought a basic Japanese book and studied. But I quit doing it after a few months later because it was so boring.

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