Writing Task(Apr 13th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think is interesting about your culture?
Definitely, I would say about K-POP. When I was a teenage, like my friends, I used to dance and sing to the songs of many popular Idol groups. Thirty years ago when I was ten, there was less than 20 Idol singers as long as I remember. However, I and even my nephews and nieces who are now teenagers don\'t know how many Idol singers there are these days. I read an article about the young boys and girls who have been training to debut as a singer and the number of them is over a millions. What\'s worse is that the article I read showed the statistic in 2016. So, I guess there surely would be more than 1.5millions Idol tranees nowadays.
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Hi, U [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your ideas about it and for sharing about your culture. Talk to you later~
T. Roanne ^_^
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Definitely, I would say about K-POP.
>> Correct!
When I was a teenage, like my friends, I used to dance and sing to the songs of many popular Idol groups.
>> When I was a teenager, like my friends, I used to dance and sing to the songs of many popular Idol groups.
Thirty years ago when I was ten, there was less than 20 Idol singers as long as I remember.
>> Correct!
However, I and even my nephews and nieces who are now teenagers don\'t know how many Idol singers there are these days.
>> Correct!
I read an article about the young boys and girls who have been training to debut as a singer and the number of them is over a millions.
>> I read an article about the young boys and girls who have been trained to debut as a singer and the number of them is over a million.
What\'s worse is that the article I read showed the statistic in 2016.
>> Correct!
So, I guess there surely would be more than 1.5millions Idol tranees nowadays.
>>So, I guess there surely would be more than 1.5 millions Idol trainees nowadays.
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