Writing Task(Apr 19th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
Can you talk about three things you like about yourself?
The first is persistency. If there\'s something I do want to do, I keep doing it until I finally get it done. I got the IQ test three times when I was young. And the result was awesome, not because it was high but it was the same. I mean I got the score 100, 101 and 101. My friends call me a dog since there was a animated film, the title of which was 101 Dalmacian. The main character was a dog. Anyway, that is not my point, so let\'s not get into that. At an early age in my life, I knew that I\'m not smart at all and the only thing I can success is to do until I get what I want. Since I realized that, I try to do with persistency.
The second is my outgoing character. I do love to meet people, talk with them and invite them to my house. I think everyone likes me. My self-esteem is higher than any normal person on average.
The last one is I get into sleep in just a few second after I close my eyes.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
Oh, thank you so much for making time to give a feedback. I know that you are very tired already. Just have a good rest for tonight!
T. Roanne ^_^
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The first is persistency. >> Correct!
If there\'s something I do want to do, I keep doing it until I finally get it done.
>> Correct!
I got the IQ test three times when I was young.
>> Correct!
And the result was awesome, not because it was high but it was the same.
>> And the result was awesome, not because it was high, but it was the same.
I mean I got the score 100, 101 and 101.
>> Correct!
My friends call me a dog since there was a animated film, the title of which was 101 Dalmacian.
>> My friends call me a dog since there was an animated film, the title of which was 101 Dalmatians.
The main character was a dog.
>> Correct!
Anyway, that is not my point, so let\'s not get into that.
>> Correct!
At an early age in my life, I knew that I\'m not smart at all and the only thing I can success is to do until I get what I want.
>> At an early age in my life, I knew that I\'m not smart at all and the only thing I can succeed is to do until I get what I want.
Since I realized that, I try to do with persistency.
>> Correct!
The second is my outgoing character.
The second is my outgoing character.
>> Correct!
I do love to meet people, talk with them and invite them to my house.
>> Correct!
I think everyone likes me.
>> Correct!
My self-esteem is higher than any normal person on average.
>> Correct!
The last one is I get into sleep in just a few second after I close my eyes.
The last one is I get into sleep in just a few second after I close my eyes.
>> Correct!
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