Writing Task(Apr 1th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
What makes you feel happy these days ?
What makes me feel happy has always been my family. Thus, I can do other things well in the state of inner peace because I feel that my lovely family always supports me and always be onmy side, no matter what happens. This feels really good!
Plus, I started to learn about how to open a YouTube channel, how to make a high quality clip and how to organize the whole contents. It\'s a lot more complex and difficult to run a channel than I thought, but It feels great that I learn today more than I did yesterday, which means I\'m progressing.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
That is really good to know! I wish it will be a successful one.
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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What makes me feel happy has always been my family.
>> Correct!
Thus, I can do other things well in the state of inner peace because I feel that my lovely family always supports me and always be onmy side, no matter what happens.
>>Thus, I can do other things well in the state of inner peace because I feel that my lovely family always supports me and always be on my side, no matter what happens.
This feels really good!
>> Correct!
Plus, I started to learn about how to open a YouTube channel, how to make a high quality clip and how to organize the whole contents.
Plus, I started to learn about how to open a YouTube channel, how to make a high quality clip and how to organize the whole contents.
>> Correct!
It\'s a lot more complex and difficult to run a channel than I thought, but It feels great that I learn today more than I did yesterday, which means I\'m progressing.
>> Correct!
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