Writing Task(Apr 20th, 2022)

2022-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

학생이 쓴 원문

Them most precious moment is when I kiss my daughter\'s cheek when she is sleeping at night. Actually I already wrote nearly 1000 byes of long answer on this writing pop-up screen. But suddenly there popped up an notification message that said the Internet connections now is bad. And the PowerEnglish homepage was disconnected. So my writing has gone.ㅠㅠ(this is one of most frequently used Imoticons we use here in Korea using Korean Vowels)

강사 첨삭

Hi, U [이름]! 

Oh, that is so sweet. ^^

Too bad TT  Let\'s just talk about it in our class later. 

~T. Roanne ^_^
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Them most precious moment is when I kiss my daughter\'s cheek when she is sleeping at night.
>> The most precious moment is when I kiss my daughter\'s cheek when she is sleeping at night.

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