Writing Task(Apr 22th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
Can you talk about three things you really want to do these days?
From tomarrow, April 25th, I’m gonna start Friends shadowing with the other 4 people whom I’v never met before. I found out the study throug an Internet Blog. We only talk on an Kakaotalk(an SNS Flatform) chatroom. One must upload at least two voice-recording files a week and each must longer than 3 minutes. That is the rule. Shadwing the American drama is what I’ve already been doing since this month. So I’m pretty much excited to join in the study.
And I’m planning to organize a new English study in my workplace. Only the colleagues can join the study. I successfully manage the study for some period, I could get small amount of subsidiary from the East District Office I’m working in to run the study.
- Winners never quit. Quitters never win -
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
I wish you good luck on your new endeavor. I hope that you will get to enjoy and learn a lot from it.
Fighting~!!!!! ^_^
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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From tomarrow, April 25th, I’m gonna start Friends shadowing with the other 4 people whom I’v never met before.
>> From tomorrow, April 25th, I’m gonna start shadowing the American TV series FRIENDS with the other 4 people whom I\'ve never met before.
I found out the study throug an Internet Blog.
>> I found out the study through an Internet Blog.
We only talk on an Kakaotalk(an SNS Flatform) chatroom.
>> We only talk on Kakaotalk (an SNS Flatform) chatroom.
One must upload at least two voice-recording files a week and each must longer than 3 minutes.
>> One must upload at least two voice recording files a week and each must longer than 3 minutes.
That is the rule.
>> Correct!
Shadwing the American drama is what I’ve already been doing since this month.
>> Shadowing the American drama is what I’ve already been doing this month.
So I’m pretty much excited to join in the study.
>> Correct!
And I’m planning to organize a new English study in my workplace.
And I’m planning to organize a new English study in my workplace.
>> Correct!
Only the colleagues can join the study.
>> Correct!
I successfully manage the study for some period, I could get small amount of subsidiary from the East District Office I’m working in to run the study.
>> I successfully manage the study for some period, I could get a small amount of subsidiary from the East District Office I’m working on to run the study.
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