Writing Task(Apr 26th, 2022)

2022-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Roanne

학생이 쓴 원문

Have you ever experienced culture shock? Actually, I\'ve been thinking about how I should write the answer to this question, but it ended without any proper one because I\'ve never experienced that shock . It might be that I don\'t have many kinds of experiences enough for me to feel any big difference from what I know. Or I might be a person who has a tendency to adapting myself to a new environment pretty well or doesn\'t even recognize it while others feel the culture shock.

강사 첨삭

Hi, U [이름]! 

Thank you for answering the question. I think you\'re the kind of person who can easily adapt with a new environment, so I  don\'t think you\'ll have to worry about it.

~T. Roanne ^_^

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Actually, I\'ve been thinking about how I should write the answer to this question, but it ended without any proper one because I\'ve never experienced that shock. 
>> Correct!
It might be that I don\'t have many kinds of experiences enough for me to feel any big difference from what I know. 
>> Correct!
Or I might be a person who has a tendency to adapting myself to a new environment pretty well or doesn\'t even recognize it while others feel the culture shock.
>> Correct!

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