Writing Task(Apr 29th, 2022)
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Have you been successful in getting rid of a bad habit?
No, I haven\'t. There\'s lots of bad habits that I want to get rid of, like going to bed late or eating few snacks between meals. I have tried to break those bad habits before and I thought I successfully broke them!. But not for long from then, I found myself doing the same behaviors that I though I got rid of. What I want to tell you is that I could stop doing bad habits for some period, but I couldn\'t get rid of them.
To break those bad habits, I must be very firm with the resolution that I made and everyday I have to restrain myself from going back to what I was. However, it was too difficult for me. I\'m not good at training myself.
강사 첨삭
Hello U [이름]!
What an insightful answer. This was really nice to read. Thank you for putting effort into writing this composition. Hope to talk to you again in the future.
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
There\'s lots of bad habits that I want to get rid of, like going to bed late or eating few snacks between meals.
>>CORRECT!
I have tried to break those bad habits before and I thought I successfully broke them!.
>>CORRECT!
But not for long from then, I found myself doing the same behaviors that I though I got rid of.
>>But not for long. From then on, I found myself doing the same behaviors that I thought I got rid of.
What I want to tell you is that I could stop doing bad habits for some period, but I couldn\'t get rid of them.
>>What I want to tell you is that I could stop doing bad habits for a period of time, but I couldn\'t get rid of them totally.
To break those bad habits, I must be very firm with the resolution that I made and everyday I have to restrain myself from going back to what I was.
To break those bad habits, I must be very firm with the resolution that I made and everyday I have to restrain myself from going back to what I was.
>>CORRECT!
However, it was too difficult for me.
>>CORRECT!
I\'m not good at training myself.
>>CORRECT!
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