Writing Task (Apr 4th, 2022)
학생이 쓴 원문
Are you a risk taker?
I only challenge a calculated risk. I\'m not gonna try to fly in the air jumping off a hillside with the strong belief of \"I can fly\" without any flying machine or equipment attached on my body. I sometimes do what my aquaintances tell me not to, but I do only when there\'s a possibility and I think I\'m well prepared. And if I keep doing it and trying to find the ways to make the results better, the attempt worth it.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
Oh, that is a good thought. Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I only challenge a calculated risk.
>>Correct!
I\'m not gonna try to fly in the air jumping off a hillside with the strong belief of \"I can fly\" without any flying machine or equipment attached on my body.
>>Correct!
I sometimes do what my aquaintances tell me not to, but I do only when there\'s a possibility and I think I\'m well prepared.
>>I sometimes do what my acquaintances tell me not to, but I do only when there\'s a possibility and I think I\'m well prepared.
And if I keep doing it and trying to find the ways to make the results better, the attempt worth it.
>> And if I keep doing it and trying to find the ways to make the results better, the attempt is worth it.
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