Writing task: Can a person enjoy tranquility at their workplace? If yes, how?
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I think there are two types of workplaces.
One is where workers can control their job, and the other is where workers cannot.
In my case, I work at the office quietly, so I can control my work.
Around 3 o\'clock, I feel very tired and dizzy.
Then I go into the stairs. I stay there for 25 minutes. I can earn the energy.
강사 첨삭
Hi, MK!
- T. Caitlyn
I think there are two types of workplaces.
>> CORRECT
One is where workers can control their job, and the other is where workers cannot.
One is where workers can control their job, and the other is where workers cannot.
>> One is where workers can control their jobs, and the other is where workers cannot.
In my case, I work at the office quietly, so I can control my work.
In my case, I work at the office quietly, so I can control my work.
>> CORRECT
Around 3 o\'clock, I feel very tired and dizzy.
Around 3 o\'clock, I feel very tired and dizzy.
>> CORRECT
Then I go into the stairs. I stay there for 25 minutes. I can earn the energy.
Then I go into the stairs. I stay there for 25 minutes. I can earn the energy.
>> Then I go up the stairs and stay there for 25 minutes. I can regain my energy.
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