[Writing Task] Do you personally believe in \'karma\'? Why or why not? Kindly answer in 3-5 sentence

2020-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I don\'t believe in \'karma\', but what people did in their life time. For instance, if an adolescent drink alcohol, than it will influence the guy\'s future. Therefore, we should behave rightly not for our another life but our near future.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Sue!

Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.

\'Karma\' is defined as the result of a person\'s actions as well as the actions themselves.

According to the theory of Karma, what happens to a person, happens because they caused it with their actions. (Source: Wikipedia)

It\'s a concept with lots of interpretation, but you\'re right, we should live life accordingly.

See you later in class.^^


__Teacher Mayleen :)



I don\'t believe in \'karma\', but what people did in their life time.

>>> I don\'t believe in \'karma\', but I do believe that people can do what they want in their lifetime.
For instance, if an adolescent drink alcohol, than it will influence the guy\'s future.

>>> For instance, if one starts to drink alcohol as an adolescent then it will influence his/her future.
Therefore, we should behave rightly not for our another life but our near future.

>>> Therefore, we should behave righteously not for the \'next life\' but for our future.

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