[Writing Task] Do you personally believe in \'karma\'? Why or why not? Kindly answer in 3-5 sentence
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Good day, Sue!
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
\'Karma\' is defined as the result of a person\'s actions as well as the actions themselves.
According to the theory of Karma, what happens to a person, happens because they caused it with their actions. (Source: Wikipedia)
It\'s a concept with lots of interpretation, but you\'re right, we should live life accordingly.
See you later in class.^^
__Teacher Mayleen :)
I don\'t believe in \'karma\', but what people did in their life time.
>>> I don\'t believe in \'karma\', but I do believe that people can do what they want in their lifetime.
For instance, if an adolescent drink alcohol, than it will influence the guy\'s future.
>>> For instance, if one starts to drink alcohol as an adolescent then it will influence his/her future.
Therefore, we should behave rightly not for our another life but our near future.
>>> Therefore, we should behave righteously not for the \'next life\' but for our future.
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