Writing Task: Do you prefer to stay in hotels or Airbnb rentals when you travel? Please explain your
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I prefer to stay at a hotel if I go on a business trip.
However, I like to stay at a guest house or a youth hotel for family trips and trips with friends. Because it\'s cheap.
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Good afternoon Mr. [이름]^^
Whoa, places to stay in Korea are really pricey! I can\'t even afford it!
I hope that I could find a cheaper place, but comfy, clean and safe.
Writing Task: Do you prefer to stay in hotels or Airbnb rentals when you travel? Please explain your answer.
I prefer to stay at a hotel if I go on a business trip.
>>CORRECT!
OR:I prefer to stay at a hotel when I go on a business trip.
However, I like to stay at a guest house or a youth hotel for family trips and trips with friends.
>>But I like to stay at a guest house or a youth hostel when I travel with my family and friends.
Because it\'s cheap.
>>CORRECT!
OR: It\'s because it\'s cheap.
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