Writing Task: Do you spend a lot of time in bed when you\'re sick?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I spend a lot of time in bed when I\'m sick.
Because if I sick, I feel very cold.
So I try to stay in my bed. Bed is warmer than the outside.
Also when I\'m sick, I also feel very tired, sleepy.
So if I just stay in my bed, I can take a rest and sleep.
강사 첨삭
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Yes, I spend a lot of time in bed when I\'m sick.
>>> CORRECT!
Because if I sick, I feel very cold.
>>> Because if I am sick, I feel very cold.
So I try to stay in my bed.
>>> CORRECT!
Bed is warmer than the outside.
>>> CORRECT!
Also when I\'m sick, I also feel very tired, sleepy.
>>> Also, I am very tired and sleepy when I am sick.
So if I just stay in my bed, I can take a rest and sleep.
>>> CORRECT!
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